Student Opinion: Roblox has many benefits for kid
My article is about roblox roblox is a game that has multiple games on it.You con do multiple things on roblox such as meet new friends,play games with family or friends,create games,etc.This game can improve your mood but most parents will disagree and say we are electronics to much but when we create games on roblox we have a chance of gaining money.You might wonder why this game gives us a better mood is case it relieves stress and anxiety. kids usually spend a lot of time on this game playing with friends.
I think this is important case it improves are moods and we get more friends and parents say we are on are phones to much .THEY ARE TO!
https://newsela.com/read/student-opinion-roblox/id/2001023397/
Good clear summary that hit all expectations, well done, score 28/28
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