Student Opinion: Roblox has many benefits for kids
My article is about the benefits of playing Roblox. I think my class mates should read this to know some games you can actually play.Parents think playing video games is bad but playing roblox can improve your mood such as wining things and satisfying rage. it also helps kids stay in touch with friends they can play together on fun games and activities.
https://newsela.com/read/student-opinion-roblox/id/2001023394/
Well done on summary, it is clear and to the point, but missing important statement -4, score 24/28
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