With no tourist handouts, hungry monkeys raid homes in Bali
https://newsela.com/read/monkeys-in-bali/id/2001023843/
monkeys are stealing food from villagers because they are hungry.
My article is about a group o monkeys stealing food from villagers. it is also about that since the monkeys have spent less time with humans they are getting bored. the villagers think the monkey's should have people around playing with them as much as possible.
I think this is important because it shows how monkeys act when it comes to food.
Well done on summary, it is clear and to the point, but missing ABC intro -4, has some grammar/spelling errors -2, score 22/28
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