Families and country recognize anniversary of 9/11 terror attacks
My article is about the tragic day of 9/11. On the day of september 11th 2001 four planes crashed with several people on them. Two crashed into the twin towers in new york city one hit the pentagon and the other crashed in a field in pennsylvania. Over 2,000 people died that day some survived. There were people from another country that thought the united states was a horrible place. They thought they would go to heaven if they destroyed us. They targeted the twin towers because they were a symbol of our strength. They targeted the pentagon because that was were our military headquarters was. They say that the last plane was headed for the white house but the people fought back and they hit a field.
Well done on summary, it is clear and to the point, but missing important statement -4, score 24/28
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